Oct 17 rough draft of zombie detective oct17zombiedetetive
Ways to show character Appearance, Actions, Dialog, Thoughts, What immovable positions would your character have? What motivation to overcome such an immovable position? Jobs influence vocabulary. Crux of story is character must face their own fear.
Latest version Oct 12, 2016 From 1999 to 2001 I lived in Damascus Syria. Back then there was no civil war, the government’s tight grip had not started to fall apart. The first time I noticed that the secret police had been in my apartment was when I noticed the two banned books I had … More Rough draft Borders
My experience from 5 seasons of FFNL, writers room. FFNL- 5 seasons-Standing open invite for anyone to join, or come and go. This is unusual but helped with fresh blood. It is my understanding writers rooms rotate a lot. We had a standing 7 to 9 meeting once a week for the 8 month season. … More My experience from FFNL, writers room
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Sept 25 2016 Write out as dialogue Gets offered job by Jake Dalton Conflict with authorities (maybe leaving free zone?) Getting out of the free zone was easy, getting back in was the hard part. Audio of giving Dalton the prints. Need someone to travel with so we can dialogue with. Who is that person? … More Audio Notes for zombie detective
Note to self: I could rewrite for longer episodes. Goal would be something to sell. Main point is to bring Lily up more in episode 1 so audience more clearly knows where she is coming from. Lily should be more devastated, or at least her devastation needs to be more apparent. Call out she is … More Notes for Arthouse from Script workshop